story board

Things i would change if i was to do my project again.

camera
If i was to do my project again I would work on my camera work for instant (holding the camera steady),this would make the film more clear,I could use the tripod to do this.
I didnt have some clear camera shots,maybe if I used like panning angles or shot reverse shot.

sound
I could have had music to make the film more interesting and look like other gangster films.
Fast music to bring more tension to certain scene's.

editing
More shots(fast paced lots of shots)

mise-en-scene

If i could do it again I would remove some of the objects that were not meant to be on the scene's,for example the signs and I wasnt able to do this because the location wasnt mine.

Looking back at your preliminary task(the continuity editing task),what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to full product?

• The secound picture is my priliminary task ,and it shows a three shot of girls talking,but when you look at the picture on top there is a big difference even though they both a three shot.
• The one on top shows the location and the body language aswell,unlike the priliminary task which is done over the sholder.
• So what i have learnt between the two is the different kind of camera angles,and how to show people's different roles in the film.

• By using adobe I was able to change the lightning in the room that they were in,and used to different shots which is close up and two shot,It is easier because you can actualy see both thier facial expressions.



• This is the priliminary task,and this shot is similair to the one above although on this one there is not a proper over sholder shot in the scene.
• Although I managed to change this by in my final film .

• With the first film which is the priliminary task I have learnt alot about different camera angles and shots,and the acting improved aswell.I did this by using more mutured actors and this also helped for the film genre.
• Got to know more about editing and what I could do to make the film better when using adobe and other resources.

What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?

• This is what I used for editing my two minutes film.
• It has alot of applications which you can use to cut shots,add music,and transitions ect.

• Youtube is an easer way to watch different genre films e.g you can get horror,action,drama,and gangster films.
• It also gave me an oppotunity to learn about the different ways which film are made,I did this by watching different trailers.
• I uploaded my film on youtube to get audience feedback,this helped me for my evaluation task aswell because everyone can see the video and comment,therefore I will know what I can improve on.

• Blogger is used to add post about the project that you going to do.
• This helped me with my on going diary.
• It also helps with being organised,and you cand add other films from youtube which are related to you own film that you are going to make.

• Slide share can be used to add presentation so that u can add them on a blog.
• I used this to add idaes about the film that I was going to make.This also gave me an oppotunity to go into more datails,by using a presentation rather than just a word document.

• On google you can reaserch about the different genres and what you film should look like when  u doing a specific genre.
• This web page also allowes you to get more information about your characters,their costumes,and what they should look like.

• With paint I could add screen graps.
• This help me to be able to explain about my camera shots in the film that I did.



How did you attract/address your audience?

Who would be the audience for your media product?





• This kind of person will probably be interested in films that have some action ,violence.So that will be gangster films.
• They will like to hang around malls,and be shoping in expensive shops,probably be buying clothes that will look more gangster like the way his dressed now and on the opening two minutes film that I made there are people who are dressed like him,so that will attract him,because it will be about people like him.
• Well when it comes to listerning to music,people like him it will probabli be rap and fast hard music,that is why i choose to do the same for my 2minutes opening film.So that it will be more interesting when it appears to them and this will also make him more aware what will be going on in the film.

What kind of media institution might distrbute your media product and why?



This is the script I wrote for my diretor's commentary

• I chose this name because it sounds believeable and more like a production company.
• This kind of comapany involves dancing,music,films and other performing arts.
• So it linked to my own two minute opening as it deals with different media institutions,so it will help with the music aswell..

2

• A production company is a type of company which is in the business of performing arts.
• This company aims to develop and physically produce performing arts, film, radio or television programmes however, in our case the production company will be producing our two minute opening
• The company may also be directly  responsible for raising of funding for the production or may accomplish this through an  emissary.
• The production company may be either a small company or large one ,selling its products to a film studio.

3

• The distributor for my film would be Universal Picture.
• The reason for this distributing company is that it distibuted  films like America gangster,lock,stock and two smoking barrels,this films also link to my own film
• Distributing companies choose a film if it has a unique selling point that would attach fans quickly and the film should have a plot in which a wide audience would be interested in.

4

• The various people named in the titles are the names of the characters as they appear on the screens,directors,sound company,and the director.
• I didnt use any other titles that were not needed ,so that the film looks relistic.

How does my media product represent particular social groups

 

• This image shows a specific social group,which will be people that like violence.
• It could represent young man,and how they get in  crimes.
• The formal clothing also shows how gangster can be professional .
• He is the main character so his appearance to the audience will be that his a male and his the boss,so thts all comes to custume and his

In what way does your media product use,develop or challenge forms and conventions of reali media products?(i.e of film opening)

• Three shot ,I thought it was a good shot because it showed what was going on there.
• Mis-en-sen its in a office,and this is clear because off the desk and the computer.the customs the women is wearing also indicates that she is a working class person.

• Mid-shot-The mid shot off the three people is interesting because you could see their expressions
• The fact that they crowding her also has an effect on the audience ,this could emphasis that she is in trouble.
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• I used a long shot for one off the gangsters,and this was to show his body language and that he is up to no good,and the fact that he does not come down the stairs, this shows that he is a suspicious character and makes the audience begin to question his motives.This scene is one of the scenes were he goes and gives the drugs to his boss.

• Close up of aimer,to show his importants and his facial expression.To make him intermidating.The fact that he is standing out the door shows that he is expecting something.

• Two shot of the kidnaped girl and one of the body guards,he is standing were the exit is so that tells the audience that men are in control.
• The use of the small room potrays that she is trapt in there and she cant escape.

• This mid-shot is a contrast of what is happening behind those doors.The fact that he is looking that way connotes that he is making sure of what is ding is right.

• The title of the film is all about how drugs can destroy famlies,andI choose it because it tells the whole story line of the film

mind map

BBFC..

• This certificate is from the bbfc ,this is to let the audience that the film will contain strong bloody violence and suicide

• mild language and references to sex and drugs

• Contains infrequent strong language, bloody images and soft drug use.
• Contains moderate language, violence and injury detail

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• This indicates that the film is suitable for small children.
• I  can also contain brief natural nudity.



audio feedback

• This is the response I got from the AS level media students.
• It is basically what they thought of my 2minute openning film that i presented to them.

Audience feedback

The following is some feedback that i got from the audience,its basicaly what they liked and what they thought could have been done better..

• One of the things they liked was the seriouseness of my actors,they looked like proper gangsters.
• Most of the actors were wearing suits,and they fitted them very well,so the mis-en-sen was good.
• They thought it was a good idea that i used older people ,its made the film look matured.
• At the end off the 2minute film one off the girls screamed and some doors were closed,and we could still hear the sound.
• I got some response from youtube aswell,and they thought the film was great.

• To be carefull when filming make sure that people that are not meant to be there dont appear in the scenes.
• That i should have put music over it so that it actualy looks like a proper film.
• Use the tripot so that the footage is not shakey. 

Intro pictures

• This is universal pictures,which is used in beggining of films with the similar genre as mine,and some different one's aswell.
• It is one of the biggest companies.

film

diary 02/03/2011

• today listerned to some songs that my friend did..thinking of using them for my film
• still bot sure which one's to choose
• edited my storyboard on paint..

dairy 15/02/2011

• today i added some post(research and planning)
• did some research about profile audience
• trying to upload my storyboard

location

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diary

• today i took pictures off my story board
• uploaded my film idea on my blog using slide share
• i am trying to finish the research and planing this week so that next week i can start editing

film idea

Film idea

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February Research and Planning Mark

Good research into different film openings (need to link to what you have learned).
There is good organisation of actors, locations, costumes and props.
Moodboard etc is there but not explained.

At the moment your mark is 11/20 which is a D because of what is missing (see below).

Target: Shotlists and storyboarding / animatic
Audience Profiling

Location and Why

• the location i am going to is is in Hunslow
• the reason for this is because the cast stays there
• Im going to use the church there and the reason for this is to make the film interesting since its a gangster film done at church ,which is unusual.
• This location is mre easy to use because all the props are available
• After church there is not much people around so that is one of the advantages,because i do not have to worry about other people appearing in the scens that are not meant to be there.

props

• the following pictures are the props im going to be using in my film.
• this props are suitable for the film because they are an example of what most ganster films use
• and these will not harm any of my characters



actors

• isaac
  emmanuel-alistair

sonia

king philip-

-kenneth muturi

sound research

• the kind of music i will use for my two minutes film is going to be from the nun-copyright music webside
• this music is good to use as it legal to use and because it futures all genres of films.
• there are other nun-copyright weside that i will use.
• and i was thinking of using my frieands music but not really sure if will not be copyright or not

http://www.divineempirerecordes.com/

continuing custumes

this is what ken will be wearing as he will look more respective,and since he is a drug dealer. 

costumes

• this is what one of the character will be wearing as she is the working class.
• being formal just shows her profession

 

• one of the main character will be wearing a suit.
• this costume tells us about his personality ,more professionali,it will seem like some one who owns business

• this is what irene will be wering.As she is going to be the girl friend for emmanuel.
• she has to look more disent since her boyfriend is important ..and  she is rich so she looks sexy since her boyfriend is a drug dealer

time line

• get the pictures of the location 4/02/2011
• start editing next week 7/02/2011
• finish editing 12/02/2011

name of the characters and the bio

• kenneth-He is a 22 year old guy who is from feltham,he is going to be the drug deealer.I chose him because of  the way he looks and his vioce as well.
• Sonia- She is 24 years of age from feltham as well.Her age is the  reason why I chose her.It shows that  even though she is in her twenties she can still be succesfull as a working class even though her brother is doing drugs and her personality suits her as a working class .
• Emmanuel-He is 30  years of age , matured looking and the fact that he is old , he is perfect for the role because he is repectable
• Irene- This lady is 19 years of age I chose her because of the way she looks (looks like those top girls,who would do anything to get what they want) even if  she has to go out with a drug dealer or an old  boyfriend.
• Philip-He is 23 year old  just finished university he is going to act as one of the  body guards.
• Isaac- Izake is a 25 year old guy who is working in a supermarket I chose him because of his body language  as he has  muscles to be a body guard.

this is irene one of the actors.i chose her because she is perfect for the role.

and this is because she is more talktive and not shy,and her looks as well

dialogue

scene one

 

alex:setting on a chair

sister:"hi"

alex:silence

 

scene two

 

Alistar's employees:silence just stand still

 cuts to alistars house:"hi love how you doing

alistar's girlfriend/wife-"i'm alright,where have you been today."

alistar:"at work"

girlfriend:"oh okay"

 

scene three

 

alex:giving the drugs to alistar-"okay there you go mate,NOW STAY WAY FROM MY SISTER MAN..DO I MAKE MY SELF CLEAR.

Alistar-silence....laughs.."this is not over yet,get me my money than you wont have to worry about your precious sister"

cuts to the sister's office -two guys going up the stairs,get to sisters office"dont move or make any noises or else we will kill you"

 

scene four

 

alistair and alex outside..alistair"dont try anythng stupid boy

scene five

 

small room (dark) alistar shouting at the girl:"well young lady thats how life repays you when your brother is a gangster/a drug dealer .i gusse you also going to follow your younger sister.

 

sister being strangled to death.she screams....quite.

end...

dialogue

scene one

 

alex:setting on a chair

sister:"hi"

alex:silence

 

scene two

 

Alistar's employees:silence just stand still

 cuts to alistars house:"hi love how you doing

alistar's girlfriend/wife-"i'm alright,where have you been today."

alistar:"at work"

girlfriend:"oh okay"

 

scene three

 

alex:giving the drugs to alistar-"okay there you go mate,NOW STAY WAY FROM MY SISTER MAN..DO I MAKE MY SELF CLEAR.

Alistar-silence....laughs.."this is not over yet,get me my money than you wont have to worry about your precious sister"

cuts to the sister's office -two guys going up the stairs,get to sisters office"dont move or make any noises or else we will kill you"

 

scene four

 

alistair and alex outside..alistair"dont try anythng stupid boy

scene five

 

small room (dark) alistar shouting at the girl:"well young lady thats how life repays you when your brother is a gangster/a drug dealer .i gusse you also going to follow your younger sister.

 

sister being strangled to death.she screams....quite.

 

end

dairy

on sunday i went to hunslow to start with some filming.hard to do it quickly because the characters had to go to a  metting..some of the film were suposed to be done out side bt we could because there were alot of people around.so it was all done in doors..so there was no problem with the weather

questionnaire

 are you?
i)female
ii)male

how old are you?
i)16-20
ii)21-35
iii)36-45
iv)56+

what is your favourate film genre?
i)gangster
ii)action
iii)hirror

how often do you go to the cinema to watch a gangster film?
i)once a week
ii)twice a month

what sort of things do you expect when watching a gangster film

what is the most memorable british film titled?

what is your favourate gangster film?

film titles that i might use

• who is next
• blood-drug
• family fall apart
• love-blood
• love-fall-apart
• how gangsters row

shot list

• shot 1-long shot:guy sitting on the church /couch,
• shot 2-cut to the coffe table(close up) of the drug on the table.
• shot 3-extrem close up of the door being opened
• shot 4-jump to the girl(mid shot)
• shot 5-zoom away from her to a (close up)of the brother spacing the coc.
• shot 6-two shot of the ohter bad guys.
• shot 7-cut to a close up of the guy who opens the door and talking to a girl
• shot 8-long shot of the girl sitting on the couch.happy face expressions shows how gangster life could be.
• shot 9-long shot shot of the guy walking towards the other one.
• shot10-two shot of the guys meting each other
• shot11-zoom to what they have in their hands.
• shot12-extrem close up towards the drug
• shot13-close up of the brother warning the other guy.
• shot14-two shot of the guys
• shot 15-the bad guys in the back round
• shot16-two shot of the guy
• shot17-

research and planing

RESEARCH

• soundtrack research(non copyright music)
• costume and location reseach
• actors and props photos
• audience research
• intertitles analysed
• uploaded youtube videos of teaser trailer analysed in detail

PLANNING

• Shot list
• questionnaire
• photo etc of filming
• dairy of filming/editing etc
• mood board
• storyboard-animatic
• script
• practice intertiles created and uploaded
• preliminary task and evaluation of it
• screen grap of editing etc

BOTH

• bullet points not full paragraphs
• detailed and linked to your project
• videos/pictures/mind maps etc as much as possible

ANALYSIS OF PRELIMINARY TASK

We decided to do our preliminary task in the girls tiolet at school.I think we did our best we managed to get all the camera shots that we were asked to add in.like the reflection of shelby in the mirror,and the shots from above of me and geogia talking.The close up of the tiolet lock.Maybe we should have planned the dialogue .

mood board

• this is the moodboard
• this is what my film will look like
• i chose these pictures to creat a mood and that mood will be a gangster film
• as you can see that there is a lot of blood,teenagers
• just by looking at this you can manage to see what is going on because its based on crime.
• the customes that the people are wearing are customes that are worn in gangster films
• the first picture tells u alot before you even look at the other(people exhanging drugs)